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Posts: 105 (04/14/06 13:34:04) Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	Tags : None I decided to edit this story because of some punctuation errors that are like this: When Lennie got home, he saw his friend waiting who was quite upset and let her in his apartment where she sat down. Lennie, you gotta help me, she said after she and Lennie sat on the couch, he faced her when she spoke. Whats wrong? he asked concerned when he gave her some tissues. My daughter has been chatting on the computer and I accidentally went on this website she went on and there was personal information about her and her friends. Personal information like where she lives and how old she is as well as her friends. I worry they are all in trouble, she told him with a big worry in her voice. She gave him the paper that had the website on it and he was shocked to see what kind of personal information was on that site. It was called my life.com and had information about the posters, what school they go to, where they live and even how old they are. Wow, do they chat as well? --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- I do NOT own Law & Order or their characters. This is going to be in the 14th season, Lennie is not leaving the 27th precinct. I will have Fontana in this story. September at the precinct- Detectives Briscoe and Green came from a crime scene when they got some information on the victim then at the end of the day went home. After Lennie got home, he had a visitor, it was a friend of his who was quite upset. "Lennie, you gotta help me," she said after she sat on his couch, he sat next to her. "What's wrong?" he asked concerned. "My daughter has been chatting on the computer and I accidentally went on this website where there was personal information about her and her friends and I worry they are all in trouble," she told him with a big worry in her voice. She gave him the paper that had the website in it and he was shocked to see what kind of personal information was on that site. "Wow, do they chat as well?" "Yes, when they chat I have software that saves there chat. Here are the chats and stuff but I have to go but the ISP addresses for the computers are there too. Bye," she said then got up and left. After he walked her out, he called one of the technicians, Julian Beck to see if he can borrow his laptop for awhile then when he went to get the laptop he got some training in chats while there. The next day- Lennie had the laptop up when Ed came in then as he sat down the chat window came up. "Oh, here we go," he said quietly while Ed left to get financials from Cordova. Lennie got out a pen and paper to write down chatter's meeting spot when Ed sat down and noticed the laptop on his partner's desk. "Lennie what's up with the laptop?" "Oh, doing something important for a friend," he said. "Okay," he said then went back to work. Lennie watched as the two chatters talk about meeting within an hour, he wrote down where that meeting place would be. He told Ed he needed to leave to take care of something and would be back in a few hours when he closed his laptop; Ed, annoyed, watched him leave. At a park an hour later- Hiding behind a tree, Lennie saw a girl waiting and a man walked up to her. He could hear their conversation. "Hi," the man said. He was 5'9", medium built, goatee and a receding hairline "Hi," The girl said who felt a bit nervous. She was 5'1", blonde hair and was very skinny. "Are you Shasta Johnson?" he asked with a smile and gave out his hand. "Yes, who are you?" "I'm Mark Giles, you showed me your picture on the website and I was chatting with you," The girl realized she shouldn't have shown him her picture but didn't show she was scared to death but then saw another lanky man walk up to them. "Hi Shasta," Lennie said with a smile. "Hi," She responded feeling a little worried. "Who are you?" Mark asked angrily. "I'm a friend of Shasta too, I chat with her and visit her when ever I want," he said when he gave her a hug by putting his arm around the back of her shoulders. "Oh I see, how did you know about this meeting place and about her?" Mark asked suspiciously. "From the website. How about you?" "From the website but I was here first and I get to hang out with her, Sorry," he said with a little anger in his voice while he stared down Lennie. "While you guys fight over me, I'm going to go and study for a test," Shasta said when she started to walk away. "Okay Shasta, tell your friends I said hi," Lennie said. "No, don'ty leave Shasta. I will take you home," Mark said when he tried to grab her but Lennie stopped him. "No, it's okay, I brought my bike, but thanks," she said then jumped on her bike and took off. "You stupid bastard," Mark said angrily then punched Lennie in the stomach. Lennie held on the Mark having being punched then both men got into a scuffle. Then Lennie hid behind a tree while pulling out his gun and an off duty officer tells both men to freeze and draws his gun. The off duty officer is behind a tree where he saw Lennie, behind a tree and another man who appeared to be reaching to his belly. The officer yells at both men to freeze and put their hands up but Mark reached for his gun and pulled it towards Lennie. Shots rang out. Last Edited By: SCcool1 02/20/09 19:21:21. Edited 2 times.
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Posts: 105 (04/18/06 21:00:19) Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	Minutes later Anita was getting reports from Cordova when she got the call, Ed, at his desk, had a bad feeling about something but didn't know why. Then he saw Anita walk out of her office towards him with an alarmed look in her face, she stopped at his desk and looked at him with concern. "Ed, your partner has been shot," He got up shocked to what his boss told him, "Let's go to the scene then if Lennie isn't there then we will go to the hospital," They both left for the scene of the shooting. After they arrived, Anita took the gun from Lennie. "Lennie, you will be on desk duty until we find out what happened. Now I'll call IAB and your PBA rep to meet you at the precinct," she told him in an angry voice. "Okay," he told her then he left. A week later Lennie and the other officer were cleared of wrongdoing and went back to their jobs even though Lennie got a verbal reprimand for his part. Sept. 14^th 2004 Tuesday morning at precinct- After Lennie walked into the squad room, he noticed Van Buren's door was closed then found out she was testifying in a court case then minutes later Benson and Stabler walked in. "Hi, how are you guys doing?" Lennie asked hiding his slight annoyance that what he was doing would have to be turned over. "Good," Benson responded while Stabler nodded while he shook hand his hand with him. Lennie then got two empty chairs and let the two detectives sit near his chair while Ed watched in amazement. He was surprised that his partner gave the information to the SVU detectives since Lennie didn't like the idea. After the detectives went back to their precinct, Beck got his laptop back and Lennie started working a homicide case with Ed. Lennie got a phone call from the anti drug department then left to go meet them at the 35th precinct while Ed continued to look at financials of the victim. September 16 at the precinct gym- Lennie went home to eat then came back to the precinct at 10 pm to work out in the weight room for 20 minutes to work on weightlifting and then went home. He started to work out during the nighttime when no one was at the gym so he can work out in peace. Ed started to wonder why Lennie made it to the crime scene late or didn't make it at all that got him annoyed and when he saw Lennie he asked him about it. Lennie told him he was doing something that he couldn't tell him what it was. October 14^th in Van Buren's office- Most of the officers as well as his partner and Van Buren noticed a change in Lennie, he looked bulkier and rumors were flying that Lennie was using steroids; Van Buren had a chat with Lennie about it. "Lennie, why have you been going to the crime scene late or not showing up at all? You know that a defense lawyer is going to start asking questions and it's not fair for Ed to be accused of something that can or can't be proven," "Well, I've been doing something else and I can't tell you what it is," Lennie told her while he sat in the chair in front of her desk. "Lennie, are you on steroids?" Van Buren asked with a little agitation in her voice. "No! What makes you think I'm on steroids? I know it's illegal and why do I want to use that stuff that could kill me as well as make me lose my job," Lennie said in defense. "Because you have not been going to crime scenes or getting there late and there are rumors around the department since you look bulkier than you were last month," she responded then finished, "also I heard that you even had a scuffle and arrested a suspect twice the size of you without any help," she said. "I can't tell you what I have been doing but I promise you that I have not been taking steroids, I know what I put in my body, I'm not Barry Bonds," he tells her. She had her hands folded with her elbows on the table facing the ceiling while Lennie got up. "Are we done?" He asked. "Yes," she told him then he turned to leave. Few hours later- "So looks like Jack's alibi holds up huh?" Lennie asked in an unenthusiastic tone. "Yes it does. Lennie, come on!! It wasn't the boyfriend. I think it was the daughter," he told his partner. "Oh shut up!! Why would the daughter want to have her mom killed," he slightly raised his voice. "Look man, she would get lots of money and plus she was going out with her mom's boyfriend so she can get closer to her kid!!" he defended his position. "Now wait a minute, if I wanted to get closer to my daughter, Cathy I would have just blown off my assignments and try to hang with her, I wouldn't have had the boyfriend of her's killed," he said. Ed looked at him shocked while Van Buren walked up to the two men slowly and unhappy. "Lennie!! What are you doing man!! Don't bring your daughter in this, she can't defend herself and you will make me say something stupid to piss you off. Come on!! That's not fair!!" "See!! You just don't think the boyfriend didn't set up a hit man? I think he did?" he yelled at the top of his lungs as the detectives in the squad room looked at them while both men stood. "Okay, pal!! Show me evidence that it was the boyfriend?" Ed asked while giving him the LUDS. "Okay, here. Some of these numbers are not the daughter's and we know it was a friend of the boyfriend. They didn't know the daughter," Lennie responded in a calmer tone. Both men then looked at Van Buren who had her mouth slightly open and had a bemused look on her face. "What is it?" Ed asked. Both men looked at her with a slight worry. Last Edited By: SCcool1 02/20/09 19:18:06. Edited 2 times.
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Posts: 105 (05/03/06 11:46:12) Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	October 17th- Lennie was undercover as Andrew Burton to find out who was giving information out regarding arrest and search warrants; as well as find out who is the ringleader of a drug deal. He dyed his hair blond, had a fake beard and since he was bulky from the weightlifting he would be able to blend in. He had to find out who was giving information about search and arrest warrants then reported them to Arthur. First he checked out the air vents to see how he could get out in case there is an arrest and he needed to escape. He found a 4th floor janitor's closet where he took the vent cover off the wall and began to crawl to the ground floor vent while having a flashlight and reflective strips where he put near the area that goes to the lower floor. When he found a slide, he put the strip on the corner than slid, it made a loud noise as he heard a few kids scream when the noise was made. Therefore, he eventually made it to the ground floor and saw an open space that his colleagues made so he could get out but was glad he made the trip even if it got him dirty and sweaty. October 19th- Lennie went undercover to meet the ringleader as well as get to know the drug dealers and find out anything that will happen. There were two guys and two gals in an apartment that was four stories high. One guy named Louis, who was medium built, Hispanic with heavy necklaces, almost 6'1", wore baggy clothes all the time. The ringleader, Jason who was white, skinny built, 5'9" and had black hair but a slight goatee. Jason's friend was a white, 5'4", little heavy set woman, with brown hair and her name was Vicky. J They introduced each other that day. "Hi, I'm Andrew Burton. You can call me Drew for short if you want," Lennie disguised his voice as a 20 year old when he met with Louis and Jason. "Hi, how are you doing?" Jason said then moments later a woman walked in from the bathroom. "Hi, I'm Vicky," she said cheerfully and she shook his hand. "Hi, I'm Andrew Burton, you can call me Drew for short if you want," Lennie said. "Okay, nice to have you aboard," she said then stood next to her boyfriend. "Thank you," he said. A few days later, they warmed up to Lennie enough to trust him then he met Vicky's friend. October 24^th- They sat at the table and talked about some drug dealing going to happen as well as a major drug buy coming up on October 29^th. They even talked about kidnapping a police lieutenant few days before the drug buy and using her as bait for a way out of the city after that buy. Also, the friend of Vicky's gave information about arrest warrants or search warrants for the police to the dealers so they can clean everything out before the warrant happens. Everyone left, Lennie went out to eat then made a phone call from a pay phone. He wore gloves, put tissue paper on the earpiece and a stocking cap so there would be no traces of his DNA on the phone and made the call. "Hello, listen to me. You are in danger, keep an eye out for your surroundings. Bad guys want you," he said in a raspy, spooky voice then hung up. "Hello, who are you?" the person asked but got a dial tone. October 26^th 6pm- Anita was in her car driving home when she stopped at a stoplight. A car pulled up on her driver's side then one driver from the car in front of her got out, walked towards her car while another man from the van next to her got out, and walked towards her car. Anita locked her doors, pulled out her badge then her gun when the man smashed her side window then took the gun from her hand and opened the door. "I'm a police officer!!" she yelled while she fought them off. One of the men use the butt of the gun to knock her out from behind and put her in the van next to hers. October 27^th 5pm- Lennie was undercover again when he walked in the apartment and sat with the gang who were watching TV. "Check out this old guy," Louis said while he stood, pointing to the guy standing behind Ed at the podium. "Yeah, what about him?" Jason asked. "He needs to retire, he's almost as old as my grandfather," Louis said then they all laughed including Lennie. "And what about the guy next to him, in a mustache, couldn't he be too old too?" Vicky asked. "Nah, he could be as old as my father but he also needs to retire too," Jason said. They all laughed while Ed left the podium and the police commissioner spoke. 7pm- Lennie leaves the building just as officers rush to an apartment and two men leave the apartment that was to be raided. Lennie ran around the corner being chased by ED, other officers went after the two men who ran from the scene. Lennie ran up the stairs, huffing and puffing then ran on the floor to find an elevator. He saw a wet floor bucket full of water and pushed it on it's side causing a spill then ran in the elevator. Ed stumbled but found his balance and ran up the remaing steps to the floor. He saw the elevator door close, went up the stairs again. Lennie got out of the elevator to a flight of stairs where it went up the rooftop. He ran to the edge of the ledge and jumped to another rooftop, looked back to see Ed running after him still then Lennie kept huffing and puffing. Then Lennie heard a yell, turned to see he couldn't see Ed anymore. "Ed!!" Lennie yelled. Last Edited By: SCcool1 02/20/09 19:18:43. Edited 1 times.
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Posts: 105 (06/04/06 19:30:23) Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	Lennie ran over to Ed, knelt down, held on to his hands and pulled him up with his might. Lennie noticed a pipe that had the ends stuck into the rooftop, after he pulled Ed on the roof, dragged him a little to the pipe and got Ed's handcuffs from his holder. "Hey, what are you doing?" Ed said as he struggled while Lennie put the cuffs on his hand then looped it around the pipe and on his other hand. Lennie got up and ran off when Ed's temporary partner, Joe Fontana came thorugh the door and ran to where the man on the ground was. "Stop, police!!" Joe yelled then jumped to the other rooftop while Lennie disappeared into the night. "Joe?" Ed asked with some embarrassment. "Ed? You okay?" Joe asked when he approached and knelt down. "Yeah, just uncuff me." Joe un cuffed the cuffs, they got up and walked back to the apartment they raided. October 28^th 8:30am- Joe was on the phone with his friend at One Police Plaza while Ed was talking to Anita. "Oh he was? Yeah, I was kind of wondering but thanks for letting me know, bye," he said then hung up. Ed walked up and sat at Lennie's desk. Ed worked on some financials then Joe told him something. "You know, I called a friend of mine at One PP and he said that Lennie may have been working undercover in area at the time of the raid," "Oh really?" Ed said but he felt better knowing that it was Lennie who saved him from falling off the ledge. October 29^th Louis' apartment 10am- Lennie was at the apartment with Louis, Jason, his girlfriend, and a few others who were talking about what to do next. Vicky's two friends came over who were helping them with information as to search or arrest warrants. "This is Jackie who is on our side from the DA's office and she brought her friend Lucy," Vicky said happily. "No warrants at all, so we can go on with this," Jackie said, smiling. "Good!" Louis said. A few hours later Lennie and another man took Anita to another location but she made her escape. She pushed the man towards a wall, Lennie grabbed her but she turned around and kicked him in the gut and ran when he let go. The man ran back to the apartment followed by Lennie who struggled to catch his breath while he ran. After they got into the apartment, they told Louis that she escaped and he was not very happy. They got ready for the drug buy when Vicky's friends, Lucy and Jackie arrived and stood at the window in the bedroom, Lennie also looked out the window then started to walk towards the door. Meanwhile- Ed and Joe had finished up talking with the parents of a victim when Ed's cell phone rang. "Yeah? What, she was? Yeah, where is she, I want to see her?" he said then asked with a smile on his face, Joe looked at him. "What happened," he asked. "They didn't give me the details but we are going to a secret safe house where she is," Ed said happily. "That's great! I'm glad she is okay," Joe said. A while later they arrived at the safe house that had two officers at the door and when they were let in a few officers and investigators were inside as well. "Lieutanant?" Ed asked then they both talked while he patted her arm. "Ed, Joe, I'm glad to see you guys," she said with a smile. "So are we," Ed said then one of the officers approached them. "I'm sorry to interrupt but, we need to get to the hospital, it seems that one of the detectives has been shot," "Oh no! Can my husband and sons meet me at that hospital?" Anita asked the Captain who was there. "Sure thing, we will let them know and you will have to have a security detail while there," the captain said. "Okay," she said then they all headed for the hospital. When they got to the hospital, Don and his kids were there and they gave Anita hugs and kisses. Ed sees Jack on the chair with a somber look on his face. "Counselor?" Ed asked then Jack looked up and Ed sat next to him. Jack sighed then spoke as he held back tears. "There was a shooting today, a detective working undercover and two A.D.As, one of them was under investigation and the other was undercover to find out who was giving out information. "Is Serena and the other ADA going to make it? Was the detective Lennie who was shot?" "Serena and Vicky are dead but I haven't heard who the other victim is other than he was working undercover. "I'm sorry, sir," Ed said gave him a pat on the shoulder. "I see that Lieutenant Van Buren is okay. Did she escape her captors?" Jack looked and saw Anita talking with her family then asked. "Apparently she did. After they put her in a safe house, she looked through mug shots to see who the guys were and she identified three of the four," "I'm glad she is okay," "So am I," Ed said then stood up to talk to Anita who had talked to the receptionist. Jack rubbed his face then watched Anita and Ed. "Well, Lennie was shot and is now in surgery. His daughter and grandkids are on their way," Anita said quietly. "Will he make it?," Ed asked. "The doctors don't know," she said then asked if Jack knew that Lennie was in surgery. He told her that Jack only knew that the victim was undercover. Last Edited By: SCcool1 02/20/09 19:19:23. Edited 1 times.
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Posts: 105 (06/04/06 19:31:32) Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	A few hours went by, Anita, Jack, Ed and Joe waited in the waiting room for word on Lennie. Julia and her grandkids showed up at the waiting room when Anita and Ed stood. "Anything yet?" Julia asked with worry. "As of a few hours ago, they told us he was in surgery but I checked about ten minutes ago and they couldn't tell me," Anita said. "Okay," Julia said then the Briscoes went to the receptionist. They found out that he had been out of surgery and was very groggy from the medicine but they could see him for a few minutes. They opened the door to see he was a sleep, nasal oxygen on his nostrils, an IV on his hand and the light was on at his bed. "Dad?" Julia asked as she held his hand, looked at him with worry while the kids were near her. "Hey," he whispered with a smile. "The doctor said you will be fine but will be sidelined for awhile," she told him while Leonard and Brittany stood on the other side of the bed. "Is Lieutenant Van Buren okay?" "Um, I don't know dad," she told him. "Yeah, she's fine. She's in the waiting room with Ed and Jack and a few officers." "Good. I kinda want to go to sleep," he told them. "Okay dad, I'll see if I can sleep in the waiting room or with you." He didn't hear what she said since he fell asleep then they walked to the waiting room where everyone was watching the news about the shooting and the drug bust. "It appears that the kidnapped Lieutenant Van Buren is safe, three of the captors have been identified through mug shots however there is a twist to this case. We turn to Leonard Villarreal for more details," the male newscaster said. "That's right. It appears the men who took Lieutenant Van Buren were under investigation for drug running and there was a drug raid where the men were killed. Also in a strange twist two women and a man were shot in the apartment owned by the men who took Van Buren. The police will have a statement shortly, Diane?" "IN that shooting, the two women were DA's. One was Serena Southerlyn who was working undercover and Jackie Tressel who according to sources in the DA's office was under investigation for giving out information concerning arrest and search warrants," "We have to interrupt this report for a news conference by the NYPD," Diane, the newscaster said. "Wow," Leonard and Brittany said. Few days later- Anita went home to her family since the department felt the men who took her are dead and one of them was undercover. Fontana stayed on as Green's temporary partner until Lennie was well enough to get back on the job as Green's partner. In mid November- Ed was working at his desk when he noticed Fontana hadn't come in then when he looked up, he saw Lennie walk in. "Lennie, you back?" Ed asked while he goes up to greet his partner. "Yeah, I'm back," "That's great man," Ed said then both men sat down. After a few minutes Anita came in and saw Lennie at his desk talking to Ed with a smile on his face. "Hey Lennie!" Anita said then after Lennie got up, she gave him half a hug. "Hey, Lieu, how are you?" "Good," she said then whispered in his ear, "thanks." "I'm glad to be back," he told them. "Did Julia and the kids go back to Florida?" Ed asked. "Yeah. A few days after I got out of the hospital." "Cool," Ed said. Last Edited By: SCcool1 02/20/09 19:20:04. Edited 1 times.

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